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illustrates various stages involved in pears processing

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The diagram illustrates various stages involved in pears processing into preserved canned fruit. Overall, the process undergoes total of fourteen steps. It is initiated when fruits are manually hand-picked up to point they are finally dispatched from the processing firm. To begin with, the fruits are manually hand-picked then transported to where they are neatly washed. After this stage, quality check is carefully done. Following this, they are put in cold storage, keenly weighed and classified in various grades. At this point, peeling is carefully done after which they are nicely sliced into nearly equal numerous pieces. In the next stage, the pieces are filled in tins at canning stage which are then tightly sealed. At this point the canned fruits are then sterilized by adequately cooking it to keep away contaminating germs, then the tins are smartly labelled there after. Finally, they are then safely stored and at this stage they are eventually dispatched ready for consumer use.

The diagram illustrates various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 involved in pears processing into preserved canned fruit.

Overall
, the process undergoes total of fourteen steps. It is initiated
 when fruits are manually
 hand-picked up to point they are finally
 dispatched from the processing firm.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the fruits are manually
 hand-picked then transported to where they are neatly
 washed. After this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, quality This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 is carefully
 done. Following this, they are put
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 storage, keenly
 weighed and classified in various grades. At this point, peeling is carefully
 done after which they are nicely
 sliced into nearly
 equal numerous pieces.

In the next
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stage
, the pieces are filled
 in tins at canning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 which are then tightly
 sealed. At this point the canned fruits are then sterilized by adequately
 cooking it to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 away contaminating germs, then the tins are smartly
 labelled Did you mean "thereafter" (= adverb, 'after that')?thereafter
there after
. Finally
, they are then safely
 stored and at this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 they are eventually
 dispatched ready for consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 