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The diagram illustrates the process by which ethanol fuel is produces from Corn. Overall, there are nine steps in the process, from collecting corn, to transporting it to other places. The first step is that the corn is collected in order to store them. Once the corn has been stored, they are then milled. During cooking, the water is added to the mixture. At this point, it has to be cooked. During 4 hours, the raw products are left alone. As the products have to be cooked without interruption. After being cooled it, the mixture is put on to fermenting stage for 48 hours. Immediately after this, it is divided into liquid and solid by product. Having been purified during 5 hours oh, the products are then again stored. The final step in that the ethanol fuel can be transported to the supermarket. Thus, customers can buy them at the supermarket which they are located at the shelves.

The diagram illustrates the process by which ethanol fuel is produces from Corn.

Overall
, there are nine steps in the process, from collecting corn, to transporting it to other places.

The first
 step is that the corn is collected
 in order to store them. Once the corn has been stored
, they are then milled. During cooking, the water is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the mixture. At this point, it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be cooked
. During 4 hours, the raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 alone. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be cooked
 without interruption.

After being cooled
 it, the mixture is put
 on to fermenting stage for 48 hours. Immediately after this, it is divided
 into liquid and solid by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
. Having been purified
 during 5 hours oh, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 are then again stored. The final step in that the ethanol fuel can be transported
 to the supermarket. Thus
, customers can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 them at the supermarket which they are located
 at the shelves. 