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The bar chart shows average weekly spending by households in different areas of England between 2007 and 2009

The bar chart shows average weekly spending by households in different areas of England between 2007 and 2009 1bkQ7

The bar graph demonstrates the mean weekly expense by England houses for seven regions of England over a period of 3 years. Overall, all areas of England had spent either about 400 dollars or upward of 400 dollars weekly on households between 2007 and 2009. London households did the maximum expenditure. Its average was more than 500 dollars. The second higher area was South east of England, its amount 520 dollars. Area of the minimum spending east North east, and then Yorkshire and the Humber. their values were about 390 dollars and 400 dollars, respectively. The average spending money for houses in England weekly was 450 dollars. Four areas were bigger than the net average of England. Those areas were London, South east, east, and southwest. Other areas amounts were lower than England's, and those regions were west midlands, North west, east midlands, Yorkshire and the Humber, and North east.

The bar graph demonstrates the mean weekly expense by England This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 for seven regions of England over a period of 3 years.

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 of England had spent either about 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
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 or upward of 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 weekly on households between 2007 and 2009.

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. The second higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 was South east of England, its amount 520 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
Area
 of the minimum spending east North east, and then Yorkshire and the Humber. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTheir
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 values were about 390 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 and 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
, respectively
.

The average spending money for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in England weekly was 450 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
. Four You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 were bigger than the net average of England. Those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 were London, South east, east, and southwest. Other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 amounts were lower than England's, and those regions were west midlands, North west, east midlands, Yorkshire and the Humber, and North east. 