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The table compares the number of people who paid visits to six World Heritage sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000.

The table compares the number of people who paid visits to six World Heritage sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000. 6Km2G
The table compares the number of people who paid visits to six World Heritage sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000. It is clear that the period witnessed the increase in the quantity of travelers visiting those places, except central eastern rainforest reserve and macquarie Island. great barrier reef was the most attractive tourist destination over the period shown. In 1996, great barrier reef appealed to 1, 670, 000 tourists, doubling the figure for rainforest reserve located in the central eastern which attracted only 810, 000 people. over the four-year period, visitor statistics for great barrier reef increased moderately to nearly 3, 000, 000 in 1998 before another 200, 000 climb from that time to 2000. In contrast, there was a minimal fall in the figure for rainforest reserve to 790, 000 and 770, 000 respectively. Many fewer travelers visited the other destinations in comparison with the two first ones. Roughly 500, 000 people went to Blue Mountains and Tasmania Wilderness each, which went up to 581, 000 and 483, 000 in 2000. In comparison, 84, 000 travelers selected Shark Bay in 1996, exponentially higher than macquarie Island’s with only 350 visitors. While the former showed a rise to 89, 000, the latter dropped marginally to only 330 in the end of the period.
The table compares the number of
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who paid visits to six World Heritage sites in Australia from 1996 to 2000.

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witnessed the increase in the quantity of travelers visiting those places, except central eastern rainforest reserve and
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macquarie
Island.
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great barrier reef
was the most attractive tourist destination over the
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shown.

In 1996,
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great barrier reef
appealed to 1, 670, 000 tourists, doubling the figure for rainforest reserve located in the central eastern which attracted
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only
810, 000
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people
.
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over
the four-year
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, visitor statistics for
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great barrier reef
increased
moderately
to
nearly
3, 000, 000 in 1998
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another 200, 000
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from that time to 2000.
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, there was a minimal fall in the figure for rainforest reserve to 790, 000 and 770, 000
respectively
.

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fewer travelers visited the other destinations
in comparison
with the two
first
ones. Roughly 500, 000
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people
went to Blue Mountains and Tasmania Wilderness each, which

went up to 581, 000 and 483, 000 in 2000.
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, 84, 000 travelers selected Shark Bay in 1996,
exponentially
higher than
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macquarie
Island’s with
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350 visitors. While the

former
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showed
a rise to 89, 000, the latter dropped
marginally
to
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only
330 in the
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.
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