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how the ground floor of an exhibition changes from 2005 to the present.

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The maps illustrate how the ground floor of an exhibition changes from 2005 to the present. Overall, the gallery map underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which is the development of the entrance hall, the exhibition room 4 catering for recreational needs. In the northwest of the plan, there were a cafe and shop and a gallery office, which now are demolished to make way for a gallery shop and vending machines. Exhibition room 4 is converted into a temporary exhibition and a children’s area in the west. At the top of the diagram, in 2005, stairs were built in order to go to the upper floor, which redeveloped into smaller stairs with a lift on the right side. On the right-hand side, there are three exhibition rooms that remained the same over the period, while in the middle of the map, a reception desk moved to in front of the entrance gate. There used to be the steps in order to get into the gallery, but it was redeveloped into a ramp for wheelchairs and small steps

The maps illustrate how the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 of an exhibition This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 from 2005 to the present.

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, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
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changes
, the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
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 of which is the development of the entrance hall, the exhibition room 4 catering for recreational needs.

In the northwest of the plan, there were a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and shop and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
 office, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
are demolished
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make
 way for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
 shop and vending machines. Exhibition room 4 is converted
 into a temporary exhibition and a children’s area in the west. At the top of the diagram, in 2005, stairs were built
 in order to go to the upper floor, which redeveloped into smaller stairs with a lift on the right side.

On the right-hand side, there are three exhibition rooms that remained the same over the period, while in the middle of the map, a reception desk This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to in front of the entrance gate. There This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be the steps in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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gallery
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but
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 into a ramp for wheelchairs and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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