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Electric bikes are becoming popular in many cities around the world. Some people, however, believe that, compared to petrol-engined bikes, they have many drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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THERE ARE DIFFERENT VIEWS ABOUT THE BENEFIT OF E-bikes. While a number of people think that, compareD to combustion-engined motorcycles, electric bikes may have numerous disadvantages, I would argue that e-bikes are better than petrol bikes FOR MANY REASONS. First of all, a petrol-engined motorbike is one of the most convenient private transportationS. There are many petrol stations around the city which means that people do not have to. . . worry if their motorcycles run out of petrol. Besides, bikes which consume petrol have extremely good life engines, AND some people have not changed their motorcycles for years (1) because of theiR strong energetic engines. For example, my grandpa (2) has used his motorbikE for more than 20 years, AND it runs very smooth and my grandpa does not have ANY intention to change his motorbike. On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial to ride electric bikes. Firstly, e-bikes are environmentally friendly AS they do not use fossil fuels. Consequently, they DO not produce carbon dioxide which is. . . harmful. . . to the environment. Furthermore, e-bikes(3) can save the Earth AND help it to be a better place to live in. Secondly, e-bikes are lightweight. People who can not control heavy motorcycles like women or high school students might ride e-bikes easily, avoid falling out of the motorcycle. In conclusion, although I acknowledge that a petrol-engined motorcycle has numerous benefits, I believe electric motorbikes are better and more beneficial.

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