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The diagram reveals information about changes of city and the number of population between 2000 and now.

The diagram reveals information about changes of city and the number of population between 2000 and now. ewEW7
The diagram reveals information about changes of city and the number of population between 2000 and now. Overall, it is clear that the relocation and expasion of residental area, business district, airport and the erection of tower of gorverment, . Moreover, the erection of dam and lake in the map. On the one hand, in 2000, space of citizen located in the North of the map and the population of areas was 20, 000 people. However, there was expanded in North and South of the city and the number of citizens increase approximately doubled by about 200, 000 people. The region of business in present became bigger than 2000 and one side located in resident area but another not in 2000 but in the current day, two side of business district located inside the citizen area. The expansion of the airport which is stayed in South - East of the city in the present day. On the other hand, there are two government buildings which are small construction behind the lake and the biggest building stay in the south of the map. The lake has divided the people’s residence and business district in half and located on the river is 2 brides that different from 2000 because this year only have one bridge. The build of the dam which in South -East and there has more major road than 2000.
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changes
of city and the number of population between 2000 and
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now
.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the relocation and
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expasion
of
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residental
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area
,
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business
district, airport and the erection of tower of
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gorverment
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, .
Moreover
, the erection of dam and lake in the map.

On the one hand, in 2000, space of citizen
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located
in the North of the map and the population of
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areas
was 20, 000
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people
.
However
, there
was expanded
in North and South of the city and the number of citizens increase approximately doubled by about 200, 000
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people
. The region of
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business
in present became bigger than 2000 and one side
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located
in resident
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area
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but
another not in 2000
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but
in the
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current
day, two side of
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business
district
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located
inside the citizen
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area
. The expansion of the airport which
is stayed
in South
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-
East of the city in the present day.

On the other hand
, there are two
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government
buildings which are
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small
construction behind the lake and the biggest building stay in the south of the map. The lake has divided the
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people
’s residence and
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business
district in half and
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located
on the river is 2 brides that
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different
from 2000
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because
this year
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have one bridge. The build of the dam which in South -East and there has more major road than 2000.
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