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Yazd Art House, a historical and cultural building with a picturesque view

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As Yazd is the world’s first city with adobe brick buildings, it has many splendid monuments and its Art House is certainly one of the remarkable attractions of the city. Located in Fahadan Historical Neighborhood and right across Abu-al-Maali Bath House, this building has been registered as Mehdi Malekzade House of Yazd. The history of the house The history of this building dates back to Qajar dynasty and four generations of Malekzade family have lived in this building. After being renovated, the house started its new function as a cultural and touristic complex. The architecture of Yazd Art House The house’s entrance is made of adobe and clay. After passing a small Hashti (vestibule), with a stucco ceiling and a narrow corridor, you’ll reach the yard. There are buildings on the northern, southern and western sides of the yard. In order to be harmonies with the other three buildings, there are vaults on the east side of the Yard. There is a not too tall wind catcher on the southern part of the house and on the northern part; there is a splendid Panjdari (a five door room) with stucco and mirror work decorations on its ceiling and walls. Also there is a Sedari (a three door room) on the east part. There is a small yard on the western side of the main yard and behind the house’s hall. The connection between the main yard and the small yard is made through the corridors built on the sides of the hall. In the architecture of traditional Persian Houses, this small yard is called Narenjestan. In some houses, it was a covered small yard with trees like sour oranges (Narenj) and flowers like Jasmine. As you enter the house, you find a handicraft shop and an art gallery, with precious displays of Yazd artists, on the first floor. In the upstairs there is a beautiful, cozy, traditional café. Thatched walls, short tables and polish chairs, traditional music and delicious herbal drinks, all together will make a remarkable experience of your visit. Bam-e-Yazd The rooftop of this building is called Bam-e-Yazd, meaning Yazd’s rooftop. As you can sit or walk or watch the sunset, the landscape and the magnificent sky of Yazd, will certainly amaze you.
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Yazd
is the world’s
first
city with adobe brick
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buildings
, it has
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many
splendid monuments and its Art
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is
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one of the remarkable attractions of the city.

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Fahadan
Historical Neighborhood and right across
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Abu-al-Maali
Bath
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House
, this
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building
has
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as Mehdi
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Malekzade
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of
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Yazd
.

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The history of this
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dates back to
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Qajar
dynasty and four generations of
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Malekzade
family have
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lived
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. After
being renovated
, the
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house
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started
its new function as a cultural and touristic complex.

The architecture of
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Yazd
Art
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House


The
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entrance
is made
of adobe and clay. After passing a
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small
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Hashti
(vestibule), with a stucco ceiling and a narrow corridor, you’ll reach the
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yard
. There are
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buildings
on the northern, southern and western
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sides
of the
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yard
. In order to be harmonies with the other three
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buildings
, there are vaults on the east side of the Yard.

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and on the northern part; there is a splendid
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Panjdari
(a five door room) with stucco and mirror work decorations on its ceiling and walls.
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Sedari
(a three door room) on the east part.

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on the western side of the main
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hall. The
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and the
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small
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is made
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sides
of the hall. In the architecture of traditional Persian
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Houses
, this
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small
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yard
is called
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Narenjestan
. In
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some
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, it was a covered
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small
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yard
with trees like sour oranges (
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Narenj
) and flowers like Jasmine.

As you enter the
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, you find a handicraft shop and an art gallery, with precious displays of
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Yazd
artists, on the
first
floor. In the upstairs there is a
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beautiful
, cozy, traditional café. Thatched walls, short tables and polish chairs, traditional music and delicious herbal drinks, all together will
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make
a remarkable experience of your visit.

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Bam-e-Yazd


The rooftop of this
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, meaning
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’s rooftop. As you can sit or walk or
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the sunset, the landscape and the magnificent sky of
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, will
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