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The bar graph ellucidates[elucidates] outcomes of a survey about individuals['] choice purchasing coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide[, ] and Hobart. Overall, it can be seen the highest proportion of individuals who drink coffee or tea is Hobart, while Adelaide accounted for the lowest. Furthermore, a significant increase is seen on[wrong use in] the people going to cafe[a cafe] to buy those in last 4 weeks. In terms of instant coffee, the consumption varies for[* from] marginally above 45% to 55%, with Sydney being the lowest and Hobart is highest in last[the ] 4 weeks. Likewise, Sydney is the highest consumer of fresh coffee with slightly below 45%, whereas Brisbane is the lowest with marginally under 35% in last month. On the other hand, individuals who go to cafe [a cafe] for drinking tea or coffee stand[is stands is wronng. use stand] high in almost every city, except Adelaide. In Adelaide, people who buy instant coffee are more compared to fresh coffee or tea.
The bar graph
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ellucidates
[elucidates] outcomes of a survey about individuals['] choice purchasing
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coffee
and
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in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide[,
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]
and Hobart.

Overall
, it can be
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the highest proportion of individuals who drink
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coffee
or
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tea
is Hobart, while Adelaide accounted for the lowest.
Furthermore
, a significant increase is
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on[
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cafe
[a
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cafe
] to
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those in last 4 weeks.

In terms of instant
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coffee
, the consumption varies for[* from]
marginally
above 45% to 55%, with Sydney being the lowest and Hobart is highest in last[the
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4 weeks.

Likewise
, Sydney is the highest consumer of fresh
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coffee
with
slightly
below 45%, whereas Brisbane is the lowest with
marginally
under 35% in last month.

On the other hand
, individuals who go to
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cafe
[a
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cafe
] for drinking
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tea
or
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stand[is stands is
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use
stand] high in almost every city, except Adelaide. In Adelaide,
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who
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buy
instant
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are more compared to fresh
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