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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 0Anb3
The graph illustrates the amount of money, people of America spend on two different types of phones yearly during 2001 and 2010. Overall, the operating costs on the personal phone had increased drastically whereas the reverse can be true for landlines at their homes. In 2001, the market was quite saturated as landline was mostly used and people were spending just below $700 yearly meanwhile the annual cost on the mobile phone was just $200. After 2001, there is a gradual increase in mobile phone expense every year while the opposite had been seen in the case of landlines. By the time of 2006, people were spending an equal amount of money in both the mediums of about $550 yearly. While from 2007, the expense on mobile phones had overcome the cost on landlines. In 2010, both the figures had quite a difference in them as the amount spent on mobile phone services had reached around $750 whereas, on the landline, people just spend about $400 yearly
The graph illustrates the amount of money,
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of America spend on two
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different
types of
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phones
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yearly
during 2001 and 2010.

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, the operating costs on the personal
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phone
had increased
drastically
whereas the reverse can be true for landlines at their homes.

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mostly
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used
and
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were spending
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below $700
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yearly
meanwhile the annual cost on the mobile
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phone
was
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just
$200. After 2001, there is a gradual increase in mobile
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phone
expense every year while the opposite had been
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seen
in the case of landlines. By the time of 2006,
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people
were spending an equal amount of money in both the mediums of about $550
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yearly
. While from 2007, the expense on mobile
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phones
had overcome the cost on landlines. In 2010, both the figures had quite a difference in them as the amount spent on mobile
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phone
services had reached around $750 whereas, on the landline,
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people
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spend about $400
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yearly
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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3 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
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