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The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the us from 1970 to 2011.

The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the us from 1970 to 2011. Kwn2N
The given line chart illlustrates the data about how much waste recovery and recycling was done by US over a period of 150 years. The statistics are measured in percentage and tones. From the overall analysis, the highest percentage was recorded of recycling in beginning year, while the most proportion was of recovery in 2011 as well as both rates displayed rising trend. According to the provided presentation, stagnating at nearly 6. 4% to7. 3% from 1969 to 1975 and escalating significantly to 10. 1% in 1985 whereas from 1985 the recycling rate continued to grow sharply from 1985 to1995 and then at the slower rate growing over the 15 years. Until it reached at 34. 7% but it had still disappointing compared to the total amount of waste recovery each year. As can be seen that the amount of waste recovery rose by 5. 5 million to 9. 3 million in 15 years however soarting moderately through out 10 year. The number of waste recovery rose rapidly from 10. 1 million after reaching at peak point it was 66. 0 million tones. waste recovery displayed absolutely rising tendency.
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illlustrates
the data about how much
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waste
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recovery
and recycling
was done
by US over a period of 150 years. The statistics
are measured
in percentage and tones.

From the
overall
analysis, the highest percentage
was recorded
of recycling in beginning
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year
, while the most proportion was of
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recovery
in 2011
as well
as both rates displayed rising trend.

According to the provided presentation, stagnating at
nearly
6. 4% to7. 3% from 1969 to 1975 and escalating
significantly
to 10. 1% in 1985 whereas from 1985 the recycling rate continued to grow
sharply
from 1985 to1995 and then at the slower rate growing over the 15 years. Until it reached at 34. 7%
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but
it had
still
disappointing compared to the total amount of
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waste
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recovery
each year.

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that the amount of
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waste
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recovery
rose by 5. 5
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million
to 9. 3
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million
in 15 years
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soarting
moderately
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10
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year
. The number of
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waste
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recovery
rose
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million
after reaching at peak point it was 66. 0
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million
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waste
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recovery
displayed
absolutely
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