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writing task one, Cambridge 3- test2

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The bar chart gives information about the amount of money spent on six different products in Germany, Italy, France and Britain. The initial impression is that, the total amount of money spent on six consumer goods mostly fluctuated between 140 and 160 thousand pounds sterling in this four European countries. By looking at figures, it is obvious the most significant amount of many spent on photographic film in Britain, which was about 170. 000 pounds sterling. However, German population spent the least and similar amount of money approximately 150. 000 pounds sterling on all 6 products. It is clearly be seen that, perfumes were bought in France nearly 15. 000 pounds fewer than in Britain. The amount of money spent on toys in Italy and France were the same, which was below 160. 000 pounds. Overall, more than 160. 000 pounds sterling spent on photographic film in France and Britain, toys in Britain and CDs in Britain in this span given.

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amount
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money
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spent
 on six This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 products in Germany, Italy, France and Britain.

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amount
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money
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spent
 on six consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
mostly
 fluctuated between 140 and 160 thousand pounds You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfirst-ratesplendidoutstandingmagnificentmarvelousstunning
sterling
 in this four European countries.

By looking at figures, it is obvious the most significant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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spent
 on photographic film in Britain, which was about 170. 000 pounds You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfirst-ratesplendidoutstandingmagnificentmarvelousstunning
sterling
. However
, German population You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 the least and similar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 approximately 150. 000 pounds You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfirst-ratesplendidoutstandingmagnificentmarvelousstunning
sterling
 on all 6 products.

It is clearly
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seen
 that, perfumes were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 in France nearly
 15. 000 pounds fewer than in Britain. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on toys in Italy and France were the same, which was below 160. 000 pounds.

Overall
, more than 160. 000 pounds You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfirst-ratesplendidoutstandingmagnificentmarvelousstunning
sterling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on photographic film in France and Britain, toys in Britain and CDs in Britain in this span This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
. 