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The line graph blow shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia.

The line graph blow shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. gOwD
The line chart displays the amount of money spent on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand and Indonesia. Overall, all of the countries saw an increase in the recorded years. China spent the most money on cars during the entire period and Indonesia saw the most growth over the 10 years. China spent 80 million dollars on cars in 1995, and despite some fluctuations, they remained the top spender on cars, and by 2005 they spent almost 100 million dollars. In contrast, Indonesia spent the lowest amount of money on cars in 1995, and the amount increased gradually until 2001, when there was a sharp increase over the next two years, and reached just over 70 million dollars in 2005. Vietnam spent around 55 million dollars in 1995, and this figure rose steadily over the next 10 years, and Vietnam consistently remained as the second highest spenders on cars. Thailand’s number fluctuated over the recorded period, and it started with around 50 million dollars and reached a little over 60 million in 2005. In general, Thailand saw the least growth in the recorded period compared to the other countries.
The line chart displays the amount of money
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in China, Vietnam, Thailand and Indonesia.

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an increase in the recorded years. China
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the most money on
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during the entire period and Indonesia
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the most growth
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China
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80
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on
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cars
in 1995, and despite
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fluctuations, they remained the top spender on
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cars
, and by 2005 they
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almost 100
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the lowest amount of money on
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in 1995, and the amount increased
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until 2001, when there was a sharp increase
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the
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two years, and reached
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70
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million
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in 2005.

Vietnam
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around 55
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in 1995, and this figure rose
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10 years, and Vietnam
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. Thailand’s number fluctuated
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the recorded period, and it
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and reached a
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60
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in 2005.
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the least growth in the recorded period compared to the other countries.
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IELTS academic The line graph blow shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia.

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