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the graph provide the information about global population

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From the set of graphs, he line graph shows the rise in the world wide population over the year from 1800 to today and prediction up to year 2200 while the bar graph provide the data on people in developed and underdeveloped areaTo embark with, there was a lower growth of the population during the intitial year, in the year 1800 population was about 1000 million which remain steady to next 140 year and reach around 2100 million in 1940. After that, there was an rapid rise in number of people that toped and reached approx 8 billion in 2040, moreover there is slight decrease in growth in future near to 7 billion in 2100As far as people cited in metro cities There was a linear increase in the number of people reising in urban area in the developing region In 2015 there were approx 2100 million people in metro cities which incline to 2900 million in the next 10 years however it continuous increase and expected to reach 40 billion in 2040. morever the people living in developed region were remain steady almost 1100 million throughout 2040 and always remain 50% of the citixen living in underdeveloped area. Overall it can be observe that there is significant increase in the population world wide whereas there is also an upward trend in people living in metro cities while there is no progress in people living in developed city and remain constant.
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the rise in the
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population
over the
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from 1800 to
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today
and prediction up to
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2200 while the bar graph provide the data on
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people
in developed and underdeveloped
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population
during the
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intitial
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, in the
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1800
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population
was about 1000
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million
which
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steady to
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140
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and reach around 2100
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million
in 1940. After that, there was
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rapid rise in number of
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people
that
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and reached approx 8 billion in 2040,
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people
cited in metro
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cities
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people
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in urban area in the developing region In 2015 there were approx 2100
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million
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in metro
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throughout 2040 and always
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50% of the
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citixen
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that there is significant increase in the
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population
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world wide
whereas there is
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an upward trend in
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people
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living
in metro
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cities
while there is no progress in
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people
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living
in developed city and
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remain
constant.
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