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the table show the primary funding source of international students in the US in 2003 and 2013

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The table illustrates the five funding sources for overseas students in America in 2003/04 and 2013/14, respectively. The most remarkable fact is that personal and family is the dominant source of tuition, kept well excess 2/3 of all international students, during the given period. Around 385, 543, 67% of the whole population got support from family in 2003; the proportion rose by just below half to 2013. Even though the percentage of those who get benefits from a foreign government or university and current employer was lowest in 2003(2%), that has increased dramatically by nearly fourfold after a decade. The proportion of the only category that has experienced decline was other sources, dropped by approximately a third(14%). Roughly a quarter of the total was funded by the US college or university, which has climbed from 134, 015 in 2003 to 171, 218 in 2013 28%. Overall, except for other sources, all showed a drastically rose, with a general increase by slightly over 50 percentage

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 for overseas students in America in 2003/04 and 2013/14, respectively
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 benefits from a foreign This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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