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Writing task (from Barron’s IELTS. Academic-module practice test 4)

Writing task (from Barron’s IELTS. Academic-module practice test 4) GNAPm
The diagram explain that the process of recycling plastic bottles of new uses. The process begins when bottles is brought to Recycling Center. After that bottles are separated from other types of containers such as glass and metal. In the stage after following this bottles are sorted by color. Third stage, they are pressed into bales approximately 7, 000 bottles per bale. Afterwards, bottles are ready for bringing to Reclaimer Center. Over the course of, 7, 000 bottles per bale are broken apart by a bale breaker. In the stage that follows, plastic is shredded into flakes with machine. During the following stage, flakes are washed, rinsed and dried. Then they are melted and put through extruder. From there, the plastic is formed into pellets. The process ends when the pellets are sold to manufacturers in order to be used to make fibers for carpet, clothing, nonfood containers and other products.
The diagram
explain
that the process of recycling plastic
bottles
of new
uses
.

The process
begins
when
bottles
is
brought to Recycling Center. After that
bottles
are separated
from other types of containers such as glass and metal. In the
stage
after following
this
bottles
are sorted
by color. Third
stage
, they
are pressed
into
bales
approximately 7, 000
bottles
per
bale
. Afterwards,
bottles
are ready for bringing to Reclaimer Center. Over the course of, 7, 000
bottles
per
bale
are broken
apart by a
bale
breaker. In the
stage
that follows, plastic
is shredded
into flakes with machine. During the following
stage
, flakes
are washed
, rinsed and dried. Then they
are melted
and put through extruder. From there, the plastic
is formed
into pellets.

The process ends when the pellets
are sold
to manufacturers in order to be
used
to
make
fibers for carpet, clothing, nonfood containers and other products.
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IELTS academic Writing task (from Barron’s IELTS. Academic-module practice test 4)

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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