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The pie chart describes the proportion of four reasons resulting land degradation globally, and the table compares the causes of land degradation among North America, Europe, and Ocenia.

The pie chart describes the proportion of four reasons resulting land degradation globally, and the table compares the causes of land degradation among North America, Europe, and Ocenia. oEWeV
The pie chart describes the proportion of four reasons resulting land degradation globally, and the table compares the causes of land degradation among North America, Europe, and Ocenia. We can see from the pie chart that over-grazing takes the biggest responsibility for worldwide land degradation, and more land in Europe become less productive than in North America and Ocenia. Globally, 35% of land loss is caused by over-grazing and followed by deforestation, which accounts for 30% of global land degradation. Over-cultivation results in 28% of land loss. Looking at the causes in different regions, land loss i Ocenia is mainly influenced by over-grazing ( 11. 3%), while over-cultivation contribute most to the land degradation in North America. Both factors lead to over half of the total land loss in said regions. In Europe, deforestation, over-cultivation, and over-grazing together contribute to 23% land loss in Europe.
The pie chart
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the proportion of four reasons resulting
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land
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degradation
globally, and the table compares the causes of
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land
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degradation
among North America, Europe, and
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Ocenia
.

We can
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from the pie chart that over-grazing takes the biggest responsibility for worldwide
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land
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degradation
, and more
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land
in Europe become less productive than in North America and
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Ocenia
.

Globally, 35% of
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is caused
by over-grazing and followed by deforestation, which accounts for 30% of global
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land
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degradation
. Over-cultivation results in 28% of
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loss.

Looking at the causes in
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regions,
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land
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loss
i
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Ocenia
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mainly
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11. 3%), while over-cultivation contribute most to the
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land
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degradation
in North America. Both factors lead to over half of the total
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land
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loss
in said regions. In Europe, deforestation, over-cultivation, and over-grazing together contribute to 23%
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in Europe.
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IELTS academic The pie chart describes the proportion of four reasons resulting land degradation globally, and the table compares the causes of land degradation among North America, Europe, and Ocenia.

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