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writing task 1 total annual hours of sunshine

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The line graph shows the mean temperature per month, while the table demonstrates the average number of hours of sunshine in a year in London, New York, and Sydney. Gennerally, it is clear that although London and New York become warmer but the temperatures start to decrease near the end of the year, the opposite trend is true for Sydney. In January, London has a higher temperature than New York, with numbers of 8 and 5 respectively. As the temperatures in both cities rise, the temperature in New York surpasses that of London in mid-March, the values rise gradually and reach peaks in July (just under 30 and approximately 23), before declining until December, when New York has a lower temperature than London. In Sydney, the temperature drops from January to July before rising again at the end of the year, with the lowest point just above 15 degrees. According to the table, New York has the highest number of hours exposed to sunlight (2535 hours), which is slightly greater than Sydney's (2473 hours). The total number of hours of sunshine in London was the shortest, with 1180.

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 of the year, the opposite trend is true for Sydney.

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 of sunshine in London was the shortest, with 1180. 