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The pie chart illustrate difference between cycling to work and driving to work.

The pie chart illustrate difference between cycling to work and driving to work. AwR03
The pie chart shows the difference between american spending patterns for cycling and driving to work. Overall, the large group of people choose comfort on driving but more of them opt health and fitness by cycling. It can be seen, that most of people think cycling is faster than driving 12%. So percentage of people which selected health and fitness and less of them are equal 30%. And 15% of them are chosen to avoid parking problems but other people think that driving safer than cycling 11%. Moreover, 13% of american population choose cycling be cause for it not required costs. According to the second chart people are prefer driving easily overcome the distance to work. Finally 14 percent of people think that driving is faster than cycling so the same percentage of people choose driving for ease of carrying things for work.
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cycling
. It can be
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think
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cycling
is faster than
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driving
12%.
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people
which selected health and fitness and less of them are equal 30%. And 15% of them
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for it not required costs. According to the second chart
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrate difference between cycling to work and driving to work.

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  American English
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143 words
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