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The table illustrates the percentage of British light and heavy smokers that is categorized in age group and gender.

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The table illustrates the percentage of British light and heavy smokers that is categorized in age group and gender. Overall, it is obvious that the majority of smokers in both gender is 20-24, which outnumbers others. In more detail, there is a dramatic increase in the proportion of male light smokers throughout the age. In 20-24, the percentage of men who smoke lightly is approximately one in three, which is double the percentage of that in teenage age, standing at a fifth. Most male heavy smokers are in middle ages, with one in ten in both 35-49 and 50-59 age group. In terms of women, it is clear that the percentage of female heavy smokers in all age group accounts for less than one tenth compared to men
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of British light and heavy smokers that
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group and gender.
Overall
, it is obvious that the majority of smokers in both gender is 20-24, which outnumbers others.

In more detail, there is a dramatic increase in the proportion of male light smokers throughout the
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age
. In 20-24, the
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of
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men
who smoke
lightly
is approximately one in three, which is double the
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of that in teenage
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age
, standing at a fifth. Most male heavy smokers are in middle
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ages
, with one in ten in both 35-49 and 50-59
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age
group.

In terms of women, it is
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of female heavy smokers in all
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group accounts for less than one tenth compared to
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men
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the percentage of British light and heavy smokers that is categorized in age group and gender.

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