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The bar chart provided compares the proportion of distinctive groups of people in the UK who eat fruit and vegetables on a daily basis in terms of men, women and children from 2002 to 2010

The bar chart provided compares the proportion of distinctive groups of people in the UK who eat fruit and vegetables on a daily basis in terms of men, women and children from 2002 to 2010 pKQg9
The bar chart provided compares the proportion of distinctive groups of people in the UK who eat fruit and vegetables on a daily basis in terms of men, women and children from 2002 to 2010. Overall, all 3 categories witnessed a rising trend over the period shown. Furthermore, fruit and vegetables was the most popular among women while the reverse was true for children counterpart. In 2002, the ratio of fruit and vegetables consumed by women accounted for the lion's share, stood at 25% which was higher than that of men and children by 3% and 14% respectively. 4 years later, it rose substantially to 32%, which doubled the children counterpart. The similar trend was seen in the men figure, with 6% more of them consuming fruit and vegetables daily. On the other hand, there was a minimal fall in the women category by 5% but still occupied the majority. Similarly, the remaining groups also experienced a marginal drop, stood at 24% for men and 14% for children.
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on a daily basis in terms of
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men
,
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women
and
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from 2002 to 2010.

Overall
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fruit
and
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vegetables
was the most popular among
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women
while the reverse was true for
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children
counterpart.

In 2002, the ratio of
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fruit
and
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vegetables
consumed by
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women
accounted for the lion's share, stood at 25% which was higher than that of
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men
and
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children
by 3% and 14%
respectively
. 4 years later, it rose
substantially
to 32%, which doubled the
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children
counterpart. The similar trend was
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in the
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men
figure, with 6% more of them consuming
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and
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vegetables
daily.

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, there was a minimal fall in the
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women
category by 5%
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still
occupied the majority.
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and 14% for
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.

IELTS academic The bar chart provided compares the proportion of distinctive groups of people in the UK who eat fruit and vegetables on a daily basis in terms of men, women and children from 2002 to 2010

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