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Writing task 1 the pie chart show the amount of money spend nad received by children charity that is located in USA.

Writing task 1 the pie chart show the amount of money spend nad received by children charity that is located in USA. LwKD8

The given pie charts depict the information about the capital invested and income got by juvenile’s non- profit organization located in the America. From an overall prospective, the maximum finance was expended by children’s charity on program services. The government grants and investment provided less income to the charity as comparison to the others. The non profit organization had earned more than the investment. As apparent from the diagram, the offspring’s non profit organization was received large share from donated food 86. 6%; followed by, 10. 4% from community contributors and 2. 2% from programmed. However, the minimum share in children’s charity was contributed by government grant and investment 0. 2%, other income 0. 4%. It is further clear that, the non profit organization was done maximum expenses on program services 95. 8%; the expenditure on management and general was 1% less than the amount expended in fundraising. Total, the charitable organization earned 53, 561, 580 dollars and invested 53, 224, 896 dollars.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 pie charts depict the information about the capital invested and income This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 by juvenile’s non- You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductgoodssavingsurplusrevenueturnout
profit
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organization
 located in the America.

From an overall
 prospective, the maximum finance was expended
 by children’s charity on program services. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 grants and investment provided less income to the charity as comparison to the others. The non You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductgoodssavingsurplusrevenueturnout
profit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagementgroupinginstitutionsystem
organization
 had earned more than the investment.

As apparent from the diagram, the offspring’s non You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductgoodssavingsurplusrevenueturnout
profit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagementgroupinginstitutionsystem
organization
was received
 large share from donated food 86. 6%; followed by, 10. 4% from community contributors and 2. 2% from programmed. However
, the minimum share in children’s charity was contributed
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 grant and investment 0. 2%, other income 0. 4%.

It is further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that, the non You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductgoodssavingsurplusrevenueturnout
profit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagementgroupinginstitutionsystem
organization
was done
 maximum expenses on program services 95. 8%; the expenditure on management and general was 1% less than the amount expended in fundraising. Total, the charitable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagementgroupinginstitutionsystem
organization
 earned 53, 561, 580 dollars and invested 53, 224, 896 dollars. 