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The maps illustrate road access to a city health care centre between 2007 and 2010.

The maps illustrate road access to a city health care centre between 2007 and 2010. D2ybp

The maps illustrate road access to a city health care centre between 2007 and 2010. Overall, in 2007 there were 3 roads to go to the city hospital. While in 2010 there were more than 3 roads for the hospital. In 2010 they added 2 roundabouts and instant of bus stop they built bus station. Both have ring roads. In 2007, the ring road was rounded all over the city hospital. There were 6 buses stop on the hospital road in front of city hospital. In the north east there was a car parking centre for public and staff members for the hospital. On the other hand, in 2010, there was a few changed in the hospital road. They added 2 roundabouts and connected to the bus station. They removed bus stop and replace which bus station was on the west. Another public parking and staff parking separated other each. Public parking was connected to the left to the city hospital and staff parking was remain same place.

The maps illustrate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 access to a city health care Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 between 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, in 2007 there were 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 to go to the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. While in 2010 there were more than 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. In The comma is probably missing here: "2010, they".2010, they
2010 they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 2 roundabouts and instant of bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 they built bus station. Both have ring roads.

In 2007, the ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
was rounded
 all over the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. There were 6 buses This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 in front of city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. In the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 there was a car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 for public and staff members for the hospital.

On the other hand
, in 2010, there was a few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 2 roundabouts and connected to the bus station. They removed bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 and replace which bus station was on the west. Another public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 and staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 separated other each. Public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
was connected
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 was Consider using a past participle here: "remained".remained
remain
 same place. 