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The map given below shows the plan for reconstruction of the second floor of Mason's Building.

The map given below shows the plan for reconstruction of the second floor of Mason's Building. XypWr
The given dipict shows the plan for the reconstruction of the second floor of the masons bulding. Overall, at the first floor is 3bhk flat including with dining, which will reconstructed as a studio in future. There will be 5 major changes in the plan. Fristly, there was a door at landing for the entrance in living room and that door will removed in next plan. Insted of bedroom #1 there is studio storage with door to keep equipments. There is studio and studio seating insted of living and dining. Moreover, the wall between the studio seating and studio is remove. Furthermore, there was kitchen in first plan and it change as a master bedroom in coming plan. Bedroom 3 is changed in laundary and it has access through master bedroom. In addition, bedroom 2 there will be guest room for the guest. There is a bath room which aslo contain bathtub.
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for the reconstruction of the second floor of the masons
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bulding
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, at the
first
floor is 3bhk flat including with dining, which will reconstructed as a
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studio
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in future
. There will be 5 major
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changes
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Fristly
, there was a door at landing for the entrance in living room and that door will
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in
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of
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#1 there is
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studio
storage with door to
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equipments. There is
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and
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studio
seating
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insted
of living and dining.
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, the wall between the
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seating and
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studio
is remove.

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, there was kitchen in
first
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plan
and it
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change
as a master
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bedroom
in coming
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3 is
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laundary
and it has access through master
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,
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2 there will be guest room for the guest. There is a bath room which
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contain bathtub.

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