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Writing task 1. I can't upload the chart

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The graph below illustrates the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. According to the chart the number of international graduates rose in all the Canadian provinces in 2006 comparing to the year 2001 except for Alberta with a decline of one percent. British Columbia had the most significant growth rate during the 5 years which was 6%. However, it can be seen that New Brunswick had been the province with the greatest percentage of students which reached to 11. 5% in 2006. A more detailed look at the graph reveals that there were similar trends for overall growth in number of students in Manitoba, Newfoundland & Labrador and Ontario with the percentage change of 3%. Moreover, Nova Scotia was the second most popular province among foreign students. clearly, the number of international students graduating increased over this period.
The graph below illustrates the percentage
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in the
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number
of international
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students
graduating from universities in
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different
Canadian
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provinces
between 2001 and 2006.

According to the chart the
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number
of international graduates rose in all the Canadian
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provinces
in 2006 comparing to the year 2001
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except for
Alberta with a decline of one percent.

British Columbia had the most significant growth rate during the 5 years which was 6%.
However
, it can be
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seen
that New Brunswick had been the
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province
with the greatest percentage of
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students
which reached to 11. 5% in 2006.

A more detailed look at the graph reveals that there were similar trends for
overall
growth in
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number
of
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students
in Manitoba, Newfoundland & Labrador and Ontario with the percentage
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change
of 3%.

Moreover
, Nova Scotia was the second most popular
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province
among foreign students.

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clearly
, the
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number
of international
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students
graduating increased over this period.
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IELTS academic Writing task 1. I can't upload the chart

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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