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World air passenger, by country, 2014-2034

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The bar chart illustrate the number of passenger who travel by air, in eight different countries, from 2014 to 2034. Overall, it is clear from the graph that all the eight countries will witness an upward trend until 2034. In term of the year 2014, Canada, USA and Brazil had the largest number of air travelers, at around 1, 250, 000 passengers. This was followed by China who had just above 1 million. Saudi Arabia’s figure just slightly less popular than China. The sixth, seventh and eighth places was taken by France, UK and Mexico respectively. As regard 2024, the USA’s figure will take the first place, at roughly 1, 800, 000. Due to its dramatic grow, China will be the runner-up. Canada, Brazil and China will be the next most popular country with 1750 thousands passenger. The last three places will still belong to the Mexico, UK and France but the Mexico’s figure will be higher than the France. If we look at the figure in 2034, the number of passenger who travel by air in USA will still take the first place with 2800 thousands of peoples. With just nearly as many passenger as USA, the China will take the second place. Following this, Canada, Brazil and Saudi Arabia will share the same number, at just above 2 million and 5 thousand. The three countries of bottom of the list will stay the same but Mexico will be the sixth.
The bar chart illustrate the
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who travel by air, in eight
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, from 2014 to 2034.
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, it is
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from the graph that all the eight
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will witness an upward trend until 2034.

In term of the year 2014, Canada, USA and Brazil had the largest
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number
of air travelers, at around 1, 250, 000
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passengers
. This
was followed
by China who had
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above 1 million. Saudi Arabia’s
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slightly
less popular than China. The sixth, seventh and eighth
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was taken
by France, UK and Mexico
respectively
. As regard 2024, the USA’s
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will take the
first
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, at roughly 1, 800, 000. Due to its dramatic grow, China will be the runner-up. Canada, Brazil and China will be the
next
most popular
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with 1750 thousands
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. The last three
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will
still
belong to the Mexico, UK and France
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the Mexico’s
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will be higher than the France.

If we look at the
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in 2034, the
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who travel by air
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, the China will take the second
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. Following this, Canada, Brazil and Saudi Arabia will share the same
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, at
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above 2 million and 5 thousand. The three
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Mexico will be the sixth.

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