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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of households owing and renting accommodation in England and Wales

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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of households owing and renting accommodation in England and Wales. The survey was taken from the year 1918 to 2011. In the early 1918's the percentage of households living for the rent was too high and the value was about 78% and the families living in their own house was too low and it's about 22%. As, the years were changing the households living in their own accommodation were started raising and in vice-versa the percentage people living in the rented houses were gradually started decreased. As we saw in the year 1971 the both were at the same level. After, the year 1971 the rented accommodation rate was started decreasing and the rate was at nearly 38% at the end of the data. The value for the owned house was at between 60% to 70%. In the conclusion we can say that as years are changing the people started showing interest to stay in their own house was increased.
The bar graph illustrates the percentage of households owing and renting accommodation in England and Wales. The survey
was taken
from the
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year
1918 to 2011.

In the early 1918's the percentage of households
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living
for the rent was too high and the value was about 78% and the families
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living
in their
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own
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house
was too low and it's about 22%. As, the years were changing the households
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living
in their
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own
accommodation were
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started
raising and in vice-versa the percentage
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people
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living
in the rented
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houses
were
gradually
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started
decreased. As we
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in the
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1971 the both were at the same level.

After, the
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year
1971 the rented accommodation rate was
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started
decreasing and the rate was at
nearly
38% at the
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end
of the data. The value for the
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owned
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house
was at between 60% to 70%.

In the conclusion we can say that as years are changing the
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people
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started
showing interest to stay in their
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own
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house
was increased
.
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates the percentage of households owing and renting accommodation in England and Wales

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