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Radio and TV audiences in UK

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This graph illustrates the percentage of UK citizens who used Radio and television as their entertainment during the months of October to December in 1992. It can be clearly seen that television was more popular among the watchers, especially in the evening. Meanwhile, despite the proportion of radio listeners being generally lower, In a morning, this type of entertainment seems to gain more attention than TV. Firstly, Television had more viewers almost the whole time of the day and reached the peak number at 21. 00. However, around 7. 00-12. 00 the audiences in this type of broadcast were lower than radio for approximately 7 hours. Moreover, around 13. 00 the average viewers of TV increased and surpassed radio. Secondly, the proportion of radio listeners was mostly lower than TV. Surprisingly, during 7. 00-12. 00 radio listeners were more than tv audiences and the number peaked at 9. 00 with roughly 25%, then steadily declined along the day.
This graph illustrates the percentage of UK citizens who
used
Radio
and television as their entertainment during the months of October to December in 1992. It can be
clearly
seen
that television was more popular among the watchers,
especially
in the evening. Meanwhile, despite the proportion of
radio
listeners being
generally
lower, In a morning, this type of entertainment seems to gain more attention than TV.

Firstly
, Television had more viewers almost the whole time of the day and reached the peak number at 21. 00.
However
, around 7. 00-12. 00 the audiences in this type of broadcast were lower than
radio
for approximately 7 hours.
Moreover
, around 13. 00 the average viewers of TV increased and surpassed radio.

Secondly
, the proportion of
radio
listeners was
mostly
lower than TV.
Surprisingly
, during 7. 00-12. 00
radio
listeners were more than
tv
audiences and the number peaked at 9. 00 with roughly 25%, then
steadily
declined along the day.
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IELTS academic Radio and TV audiences in UK

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