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The table shows the different things people in the UK spend their money on.

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The table illustrates how English people spent their money on their household on a weekly basis. Overall, it is evident that the British spent the largest amount of money on housing, while the least is spent on health. The biggest contribution is made to housing, transport, and recreation. People allocated 27% to housing, which is by far the highest percentage. With a difference of 13% from housing, is transport, standing at 14%. Though both recreation and food are two categories that are relatively similar, people from England contributed 1% more to recreation, which is 12%. Average spending on restaurants and hotels, other goods and services, and household goods and services was 8%, 8%, and 7% respectively, all less than 10%. Moreover, people in England only contributed a small budget to communication, education, and health. Only 5% of their income is spent on communication, 2% on education, and only 1% on health.
The table illustrates how English
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their money on their household on a weekly basis.
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the largest amount of money on housing, while the least is
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on health.

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to housing, transport, and recreation.
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allocated 27% to housing, which is by far the highest percentage. With a difference of 13% from housing, is transport, standing at 14%. Though both recreation and food are two categories that are
relatively
similar,
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from England contributed 1% more to recreation, which is 12%.

Average spending on restaurants and hotels, other
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and services was 8%, 8%, and 7%
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in England
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budget to communication, education, and health.
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