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Writing IELTS task 1: fast food consumption, line graph

Writing IELTS task 1: fast food consumption, line graph bDOEW

The illustration presents the fluctuation in the number and kind of Australian adolescents’ fast food consumption between 1975 and 2000. Overall, the amount of fish and chips eaten enormously fell, while there was a boom in the pizza and hamburgers consumption. Starting at the highest point in 1975, the fish and chips consumption decreased by nearly 20% 5 years later before arriving at around 90 times in the year 1985. After that, it sharply dropped to around 40 times in the last year of the 20th century, becoming the least popular fast food of the three. On the other hand, the number of hamburgers and pizzas consumed was on the rise during the 25-year span. The former dramatically went up and surpassed the quantity of fish and chips eaten in 1985, then leveling out at 100 times from 1995 to 2000. The latter underwent a growth of approximately 17% prior to a considerable climb over a course of a decade, when it excelled the figure for the only dish from the UK in the graph eaten, following by a plateau at more than 80 times between 1995 and 2000, end up being the most famous among the trio.

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 from 1995 to 2000. The latter underwent a growth of approximately 17% prior to a considerable climb over a course of a decade, when it excelled the figure for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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