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My house is very beautiful and has many rooms like living room, dining room, kitchen. But, I love my bedroom the most. It is on the second floor of my house. In my room, there is a bed, a table, a chair and a pink wardrobe. Not only that, my room is painted blue color so makes me feel comfortable. In addition, there is a bookself. I can read book in my leisure time and relax. I spend most of time in my bedroom to study and sleep. Sometimes, I watch movies, listen to postcard in my room. Besides, It is a place where my friend gather when they come to my home to play. We talk together for many hours. Sometime we event hold slumber parties in here. In my cheer hood memory is coupled with every corner of the room so I like my room. In my deep, this room is not only place to greet me after very stressful study seasion, but also a friend to witness very step of growth. This room is small but it has becomea vital piece in my life
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my bedroom the most. It is on the second floor of my
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. In my
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, there is a bed, a table, a chair and a pink wardrobe. Not
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that, my
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me feel comfortable.
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bookself
. I can read book in my leisure time and relax. I spend
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in my bedroom to study and sleep.
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movies, listen to postcard in my
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, It is a place where my friend gather when they
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to my home to play. We talk together for
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hours. Sometime we
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hold slumber parties in here. In my cheer hood memory
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with every corner of the
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I like my
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. In my deep, this
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stressful study
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a friend to witness
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step of growth. This
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IELTS academic writing about your favourite room

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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