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The charts illustrate the sources of power in three different periods in Gareline, with the data divided into 6 different areas.

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The given pie charts depict the information about the proportion of energy produced from six different sources in Gareline over the years of 1970, 1980 and 1990. Overall, the major source of electricity production was hydropower energy in the years 1980 and 1970, while it was not top in 1990. Moreover, other source such as wind, gas, nuclear was covered minor portion in electricity production. At the first glance, it is clearly seen that almost three-quarter portion was covered by hydro energy for generating electricity in 1980, while it was reduced around 30% in the year 1970 and it was accounted 34% in 1990. Apart from this, around 1. 5% was produced by other sources during the all years. Further, analysis of the chart of power generate in 1990 portrays that in Gareline, the 39% of people used geothermal energy to generate the electricity; However only 2. 5% electricity was produced from the gas. The nuclear energy was used as an electricity production then it was almost doubler than wind energy, at 15. 5%. Only minor portion of electricity was gotten from other sources.
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produced from six
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in
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over the years of 1970, 1980 and 1990.
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, the major
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source
of
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electricity
production was hydropower
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energy
in the years 1980 and 1970, while it was not top in 1990.
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, other
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source
such as wind, gas, nuclear
was covered
minor portion in
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electricity
production. At the
first
glance, it is
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seen
that almost three-quarter portion
was covered
by hydro
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for generating
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electricity
in 1980, while it was
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reduced
around 30% in the
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year
1970 and it
was accounted
34% in 1990. Apart from this, around 1. 5%
was produced
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sources
during the all years.
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, the 39% of
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geothermal
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to generate the
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;
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only
2. 5%
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was produced
from the gas. The nuclear
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was
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used
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production then it was almost doubler than wind
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, at 15. 5%.
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minor portion of
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IELTS academic The charts illustrate the sources of power in three different periods in Gareline, with the data divided into 6 different areas.

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