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The charts illustrate the sources of power in three different periods in Gareline.

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The charts illustrate the sources of power in three different periods in Gareline, with the data divided into 6 different areas. In 1970, nearly half of all electricity was derived from hydro power, which accounted for 45% of the total. Geothermal production was slightly less than half this value, followed by wind power which created 5% of all power, with gas and the category labelled as 'other' making just over one percent each. In 1980, the figure for hydro power had increased dramatically, making over three quarters of the total. Geothermal, wind and nuclear power created 8%, 7% and 6% respectively, with the other two categories increasing by only 0. 2%. By 1990, the trend for hydro power had reversed, with the most productive category now being geothermal power. Wind power had remained constant but there was a significant increase in electricity produced by nuclear power, accounting for 15. 5%. There was a minor increase once again for wind power and the 'other' category. In total, geothermal power and hydro power were always the most productive, although nuclear power was increasing.
The charts illustrate the sources of
power
in three
different
periods in
Gareline
, with

the
data divided into 6
different
areas.

In 1970,
nearly
half of all electricity
was derived
from hydro
power
, which accounted

for
45% of the total. Geothermal production was
slightly
less than half this value,

followed by
wind
power
which created 5% of all
power
, with gas and the category

labelled
as 'other' making
just
over one percent each.

In 1980, the figure for hydro
power
had increased
dramatically
, making over three

quarters
of the total. Geothermal,
wind
and nuclear
power
created 8%, 7% and 6%

respectively
, with the other two categories increasing by
only
0. 2%.

By 1990, the trend for hydro
power
had reversed, with the most productive category

now
being geothermal
power
.
Wind
power
had remained constant
but
there was
a


significant
increase in electricity produced by nuclear
power
, accounting for 15. 5%.

There was a minor increase once again for
wind
power
and the 'other' category.

In total, geothermal
power
and hydro
power
were always the most productive,

although nuclear
power
was increasing.
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