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household car ownership in five time period

household car ownership in five time period WgGw5

Overall, every age group has experienced significant growth for the last five years. Furthermore, The most numerous number was obtained by the 18-29s at the end of the period, whereas the least common proportion was gained by the 46-55’s in the first year. Regarding the youngest age group, since 2010, the population of family car ownership had increased considerably by approximately 2-3% each year, from 22% in 2010 until exactly 30% in 2013, then had jumped more than one-third times by 2014. Similar with the 18-29s, the 46-55 age range also occupied the slight growth in household car ownership for the period given. In the first two year, the proportion was around 15%, then became growing significantly by almost 10% in 2012. After that term, the accumulation of car ownership had risen significantly to around 30% and almost reached 35% in 2013 and 2014, respectively. In terms of the middle adult group, the increasing number of the ownership started from 20% and was stagnant until the next couple of years, then had risen dramatically by 2012 before it decreased slowly in 2014. The age group of 56-65 also underwent the same pattern like the 30-45s, which was relatively stable at the first couple of years (around 20%) then grew rapidly after that time. In 2012 until 2013 the prevalence was similar, which was approximately 27%. At the end of the period, the fast growth reached over 36%.

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