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Write an essay about the procces of making stringhoopers,using the pictures.

Write an essay about the procces of making stringhoopers, using the pictures. 0nYQG
The diagram, shows the stages of making stringhopper, including six steps. To start up, you should put the rice into the grinder and gring it into a plate. Then, you need to add some water. After that, you must make a dough, by pushing it with your hands. To continiue, you should put the sough throigh the string hooper. The naext stage, is, to cook this all in a streaner. Finally, you'r food is ready and you can serve it with some sussageaas.
The diagram,
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the stages of making
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stringhopper
, including six steps. To
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start
up, you should put the rice into the grinder and
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gring
it into a plate. Then, you need to
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add
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some
water. After that, you
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must
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make
a dough, by pushing it with your hands. To
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continiue
, you should put the sough
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throigh
the string
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hooper
. The
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naext
stage, is, to cook this all in a
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streaner
.
Finally
,
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you'r
food is ready and you can serve it with
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some
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sussageaas
.
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IELTS academic Write an essay about the procces of making stringhoopers, using the pictures.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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