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the graph shows the information of computer ownership by education level in year 2002and 2010.

the graph shows the information of computer ownership by education level in year 2002and 2010. aq5RX

The bar graph illustrate the statistics of education level of computer possessions. The data is conducted from year 2002 and 2010. Overall, In both year percentage of coaching goes up in all levels However, Comparing both years percentage is highest in all level of learning in given last year. In 2010, Percentage of no high school diploma was about 40%, being higher than the year 2002's level, by approximately 26%. Then, in 2010, high school graduates were rose almost 70%. However, the figure showed gradual increase in following observations. Almost 80% computer ownership get teaching from college in 2010 and continued to grow steadily to the end of the period, reaching around approximately 85%. Coaching in bachelor's degree. And climbed at 90% by postgraduate qualification in 2010. Proportion in 2002, of computer ownership by no high school diploma was higher than 10%, and it increased in high school graduate, when about one third of 100 owners in 2002 was taking coaching from high school. The figure experienced a steady growth during next the academic works. It rose to approximately 60% students of college then increase by about 3%, learners of bachelor's degree also increased steadily in following academic work.

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