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The charts below show information about the number of fish caught and the number of fishing boats used in Westhaven. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show information about the number of fish caught and the number of fishing boats used in Westhaven. k6Knd
The first chart shows how many tuna and swordfish were caught near Westhaven between 2008 and 2011. The second chart illustrates the quantity of fishing boats were there in the same period. The number of tuna fish increased considerably from 85, 800 in 2008 to 110, 000 in 2011. In 2009 and 2010, the amount of tuna fish rose consistently, reaching 100, 000 and 110, 000 respectively. In contrast, the number of swordfish caught fluctuated between 2008 and 2011 was 50, 000; 120, 000; 70, 000 and 110, 000 respectively. Nonetheless, this swordfish showed a moderate increase from 2010 to 2011, despite the fact that it had already decreased by 30, 000 fish from 2009 to 2010. It is still unclear that variables caused these unusual circumstances, such as the environment or in some cases, change in swordfish population. However, in 2008, there were just 50 fishing boats in operation. After that, in 2009, they peaked at 55 and then dropped to around 42. The highest number of boats happened in 2011, with an average of 70. Overall, the number of fishing boats that were used did not affect the number of tuna which were caught. However, it did appear to affect the number of swordfish. When there were more boats, more swordfish were caught.
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fish increased
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fish rose
consistently
, reaching 100, 000 and 110, 000
respectively
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, the
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of swordfish caught fluctuated between 2008 and 2011 was 50, 000; 120, 000; 70, 000 and 110, 000
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a moderate increase from 2010 to 2011, despite the fact that it had already decreased by 30, 000 fish from 2009 to 2010. It is
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50 fishing
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in operation. After that, in 2009, they peaked at 55 and then dropped to around 42. The highest
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of
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happened in 2011, with an average of 70.
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of swordfish. When there were more
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, more swordfish
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