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The bar charts shows the number of different aged people who face challenges when they go abroad .

The bar charts shows the number of different aged people who face challenges when they go abroad. Q5WyL
The ostensible bar graph details the information about the proportion of inhabitants on the basis of three distinct age levels who experienced different genres of obstackles when they went abroad for living purposes. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that finding place to live and making friends both troubles were more popular amongest the younger and middle - aged, Whereas senior citizens mostly faced learning the local language menace. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that nearly 40% both youngest and medium age groups were experienced challenges regarding accomodation. In contrast, people who had trouble to adopt a new language their percentage was 29% for 18-34 and 35% for 34-54 years old. While, 36% middle age group onus were unable to socialize with others and that was followed by youth with 10% difference (46%). Turning to the remaining information, it is barely evident that more than half percentage (54%)of over 55 witnessed challenge toblearn a local language, Whilst for remaining difgiculties there was a considerable difference in the proportion of them with 22% and 23% respectively.
The ostensible bar graph
details
the information about the proportion of inhabitants on the basis of three distinct age levels who experienced
different
genres of
obstackles
when they went abroad for living purposes.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that finding place to
live
and making friends both troubles were more popular
amongest
the younger and middle
-
aged, Whereas senior citizens
mostly
faced learning the local language menace.

Having a
clear
glance, it can be
seen
that
nearly
40% both youngest and medium age groups
were experienced
challenges regarding
accomodation
.
In contrast
,
people
who had trouble to adopt a new language their percentage was 29% for 18-34 and 35% for 34-54 years
old
. While, 36% middle age group onus were unable to socialize with others and that
was followed
by youth with 10% difference (46%).

Turning to the remaining information, it is
barely
evident that more than half percentage (54%)of over 55 witnessed challenge
toblearn
a local language, Whilst for remaining
difgiculties
there was a considerable difference in the proportion of them with 22% and 23%
respectively
.
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