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Reading and leisure time

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Since the pandemic struck two years ago and forced us to stay home, many leisure activities such as going out with a friend for a coffee or picnics and vacations have been canceled. As a result, many people are looking for a new way of entertaining themselves. Firstly, books are easy to access. Nowadays, thanks to technology, It is pretty easy to access a various number of books via internet. You can either order a paper book online and enjoy the feeling and smell of visual books, or get the e-book version and read through your phone and other digital gadgets. You can even find the audio versions online and have someone read the story for you! Secondly, books are a way of living a thousand lives at once. There are a numerous types of books that you can choose based on your personal interests. Are you looking for adventure? Fantasy or science fiction is your answer. Do you enjoy mystery? Pick up a thriller! I, as a person who enjoys reading, can assure you of all the adventures and life-lessons that await you. Jhumpa Lahiri, an American author, once said: “That's the thing about books. They let you travel without moving your feet. ” Finally, reading improves your life. books are one of the biggest resources of knowledge and experience presented in a way you will never forget. So, the next time you get bored, I suggest you pick up a book and enjoy a few pages of wonder.
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leisure activities such as going out with a friend for a coffee or picnics and vacations have
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are looking for a new way of entertaining themselves.

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are easy to access. Nowadays, thanks to technology, It is pretty easy to access a various number of
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via internet. You can either order a paper
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online and
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the feeling and smell of visual
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the e-book version and read through your phone and other digital gadgets. You can even find the audio versions online and have someone read the story for you!

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are a way of living a thousand
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at once. There are a numerous
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that you can choose based on your personal interests. Are you looking for adventure? Fantasy or science fiction is your answer. Do you
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mystery? Pick up a thriller! I, as a person who
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reading, can assure you of all the adventures and life-lessons that await you.
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your life.
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are one of the biggest resources of knowledge and experience presented in a way you will never forget.

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a few pages of wonder.
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IELTS academic Reading and leisure time

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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