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The given table and graph unveils The data about purchasers expenditure On some Particular Things such as bring clothing stuff footwear items education and leisure Products in five different countries namely Ireland Italy Spain Sweden enter key in the year of 2002. The given information and data is in proportion or percentage. From an overall perspective, it is manifest from the temple and craft that the proportion Of expenditure Of consumers of country Turkish is the highest on for drink and The Bahu in 2002, while in Italy proportion of expenditure On clothing and footwear stop is highest amongst Call and spending On leisure And education in Sweden in maximum Italy it is slightly low. Meticulously observing The tablet, it is seen that in country expenditure of consumers A food drink and Tumko was 28. 91% And of clothing And footwear stuff was 6. 43% While only on leisure is an education or 2. 21%. Whereas the proportion of Italian consumers of food rain in Tumkur more 16. 36% While working and laser activities and education was 9. 00% and 3. 20% Respectively. In addition, Spanish conception on four green clothing footwear laser and education was 18. 80%, 6. 51% and 1. 98% sequentially. Further proving The same point of view it is clear that expenditure on food beverages In Tumkur was 15. 77 of Sweden countries shoppers why are you on clothing and footwear was 5. 40 well as a leisure and education was 3. 22 Sweden shoppers. Further more, Turkish consumerism On food drink and Tumko was 32. 14 which was highest among all countries while on Clothing and footwear stuff was 6. 63 which was also highest among all other countries on leisure Activities and education was 4. 35 which was very high.
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4 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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