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Doing anything for the first time can be a memorable experience for anyone, for me the first day of school is a memory that I will never forget. I still remember it was a beautiful autumn morning, my mother toke me to school by her bicycle. That time my feeling was extremely anxious for my first day of class. I had prepared for that day all summer, and I were so excited that I could not sleep the night before. I went by that school many times, but that was the first time that I could actually get into and observe everything. It is a small and really old building with 10 classes. My class is the first one. My mother took me to the classroom to meet my teacher. I had a bit worry because before that some people had teased me that the teachers at school were very strict and scary. But in fact, my teacher was very gentle and she took a really good care of me. She arranged me to sit at the first table because I was shorter than my friends. After that, she spent the rest of the time getting us to know each other. I did not remember what I had learned that day, what I remember were just the cheerful laughs of my teacher and friends. The first day always be the most impressive day, and I still remember every detail of it. Now I am in university, but that sweet memory is always in my heart.

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