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We were given two pie charts which compared the household expenditure in Malaysia and Japan in 2010.

We were given two pie charts which compared the household expenditure in Malaysia and Japan in 2010. 25Nqo

The following pie charts show the proportion of money spent on various household expenditures in Malaysia and Japan in the year 2010. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, we can see that in both the countries, housing, food and other goods and services were the main expenses while both spent least on health care. Observing the data in detail, we see that the average expenditure on housing in Japan is in 2010 is 21% whereas in Malaysia, it is 34%. The expenses for food in Japan is 24% whilst in Malaysia, its 27%. Further, for other goods and services in Japan, the money spent is 29% while in Malaysia its 26%. Talking about transport, we see that the average squandering in Japan is 21%. On the contrary, in Malaysia it is only 10%. Now, considering health care, we fathom that both the countries have spent the least on health care, Japan, 6% and Malaysia, 3%.

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see
 that the average expenditure on housing in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 is in 2010 is 21% whereas in Malaysia, it is 34%. The expenses for food in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 is 24% whilst in Malaysia, its 27%. Further
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 and services in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
, the money You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
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 is 29% while in Malaysia its 26%.

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 that the average squandering in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 is 21%. On the contrary
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Now
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spent
 the least on health care, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
, 6% and Malaysia, 3%. 