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the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018.

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The given pie chart provides information about the proportion of people using digital networking according to age group in Jamestown for the year 2018. Overall, the general trend of Jamestown’s social media users in 2018 showed that the older people were, the less likely they would be to use digital networking. In terms of the most significant feature of the chart, the largest category of digital communications was the group aged 13 to 2, which accounted for 40% of the total users. Additionally, the next major segment of the population using social media included people aged between 26 and 35, which showed a slightly lower contribution at 35%. When added together, these two categories made up three-quarters of Jamestown’s social media users who used digital platforms in 2018. In stark contrast, the category with the lowest percentage of users included people over 55 years old, accounting for a minute 2% of all users. This trend was joined by people aged 46 to 55 and people between 36 and 45 years of age, representing 8% and 15%, respectively. Of particular note is that those aged over 36 collectively made up only 25% of Jamestown's social media users.
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using digital networking according to age group in Jamestown for the year 2018.

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, the general trend of Jamestown’s
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in 2018
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that the older
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were, the less likely they would be to
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digital networking.

In terms of the most significant feature of the chart, the largest category of digital communications was the group
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13 to 2, which accounted for 40% of the total
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users
.
Additionally
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included
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between 26 and 35, which
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together, these two categories made up three-quarters of Jamestown’s
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who
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digital platforms in 2018.

In stark contrast, the category with the lowest percentage of
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included
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over 55 years
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, accounting for a minute 2% of all
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. This trend was
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46 to 55 and
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between 36 and 45 years of age, representing 8% and 15%,
respectively
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