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Write about the usefuls of smartphone

Write about the usefuls of smartphone K3Aek

Today, smartphone plays an important role. It has become a necessary device in people's daily life. First, you can use your smartphone to take photos and record videos. With a smartphone, you can save wonderful memories and essentials with just a few taps. Compared with cameras, smartphones are more portable and have more features. In addition, you can easily find the necessary lessons and informations what you need through a smartphone. Once connected to WI-FI or mobile data network, you can go online and search for study lessons and useful knowledge. You can also take useful courses on your phone. Moreover, you can buy anything you want like books, clothes. . . . quickly and conveniently. You can choose what we want to buy on your phone without having to go to the place. And you can pay easily with your own smartphone in a very easy way.

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