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The line graph illustrates the figure of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph illustrates the figure of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. L3AJr
The line graph illustrates the figure of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. From 2010 to 2011, the number of tourists who stayed on the island kept at about 0. 75 million. At the same time, the figure of visitors staying on cruise ships had an increasing trend that was from 0. 25 million to 0. 5 million. The formation of people staying on cruise ships had reduced from 0. 5 million in 2011 to about 0. 25 million in 2012. After, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships had a growing trend to 2 million in 2017. The figure of visitors staying on the island rose to about 1. 5 million in 2013. And the figure remained to 2015. The number of visitors staying on the island dropped to about 1. 75 million in 2016. From 2016 to 2017, the formation of visitors staying on the island returned to 1. 5 million in 2017. The total number of visitors staying on cruise ships and the island had an increasing trend from 1 million in 2010 to 3. 5 million in 2017. Overall, it is clear that besides the year passed, the total of people visiting the particular Caribbean islands had an increasing trend. In the medium of 2015 to 2016, visitors staying on the island at over than visitors staying on cruise ships.
The line graph illustrates the
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of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean
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island
between 2010 and 2017.

From 2010 to 2011, the
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number
of tourists who stayed on the
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island
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kept
at about 0. 75
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million
. At the same time, the
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figure
of
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
had an increasing
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trend
that was from 0. 25
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million
to 0. 5
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million
. The formation of
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people
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
had
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reduced
from 0. 5
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million
in 2011 to about 0. 25
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million
in 2012.
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After
, the
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
had a growing
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trend
to 2
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million
in 2017. The
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figure
of
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visitors
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staying
on the
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island
rose to about 1. 5
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million
in 2013. And the
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figure
remained to 2015. The
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on the
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island
dropped to about 1. 75
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million
in 2016. From 2016 to 2017, the formation of
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visitors
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staying
on the
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island
returned to 1. 5
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million
in 2017. The total
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
and the
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island
had an increasing
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trend
from 1
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million
in 2010 to 3. 5
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million
in 2017.

Overall
, it is
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that
besides
the year passed, the total of
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people
visiting the particular Caribbean
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islands
had an increasing
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trend
. In the medium of 2015 to 2016,
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visitors
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staying
on the
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at
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over
than
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
.

IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the figure of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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