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Write a summary of the information of the chart: International visitors to New Zealand: transport used during visit

Write a summary of the information of the chart: International visitors to New Zealand: transport used during visit GrY7Q
The bar chart provide information of how visitors travel in New Zealand. A large quantity of cars is used as transportation, which cover 68 percent. While plane and coach come as second most used, both with half the amount of cars, 32 percent. The second least is train, only 20 percent visitors use it while traveling in New Zealand. And the least favorite is boat, under 10 percent is used. In conclusion, private transportation seems to be widely used to go around New Zealand.
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as second most
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, both with half the amount of cars, 32
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. The second least is train,
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visitors
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it while traveling in New Zealand. And the least favorite is boat, under 10
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is
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to go around New Zealand.
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IELTS academic Write a summary of the information of the chart: International visitors to New Zealand: transport used during visit

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