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The line graph shows the information of changes that occur in three different crime in the city newport city between 2003 to 2012

The line graph shows the information of changes that occur in three different crime in the city newport city between 2003 to 2012 8xear

The provided multi linear graph illustrate the information related to the variation that occurred in three distinguish rate of crime in the Newport City Centre between 2003 and 2012. The data is calibrated in numbers. Firstly, in 2003 the highest crime in area was seen in Bulgary which was under 3500 approximately. Followed by car theft and robbery which was around 2700 and 700 respectively. After the two years, the Bulgary was went down gradually until 2008 and car theft went up in 2006 at last robbery remained same till 2008. Moving further, in 2008 to 2009 all three steadily grew and Bulgary remain constant in the end of the period which was 1500 nearly as well as robbery still less done crime by plebeians in the city till 2012 which was almost 700 at the same point which they started in 2003. However, car theft was on the zenith point at 2012. Overall it can be concluded that robbery was minor crime seen in the following year nonetheless car theft was a major crime which was on the peak in the inner city at the end of the period.

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crime
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Bulgary
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theft
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robbery
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. After the two years, the Possible spelling mistake found.BulgarBulgariBulgar y
Bulgary
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went
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car
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theft
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robbery
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Moving further
, in 2008 to 2009 all three steadily
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Bulgary
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end
 of the period which was 1500 nearly
as well
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robbery
still
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crime
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started
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car
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theft
 was on the zenith point at 2012.

Overall
 it can be concluded
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfelonyheistholdupembezzlementlarcenytheft
robbery
 was minor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
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seen
 in the following year nonetheless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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theft
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crime
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end
 of the period. 