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The line graph shows the information of changes that occur in three different crime in the city newport city between 2003 to 2012

The line graph shows the information of changes that occur in three different crime in the city newport city between 2003 to 2012 8xear
The provided multi linear graph illustrate the information related to the variation that occurred in three distinguish rate of crime in the Newport City Centre between 2003 and 2012. The data is calibrated in numbers. Firstly, in 2003 the highest crime in area was seen in Bulgary which was under 3500 approximately. Followed by car theft and robbery which was around 2700 and 700 respectively. After the two years, the Bulgary was went down gradually until 2008 and car theft went up in 2006 at last robbery remained same till 2008. Moving further, in 2008 to 2009 all three steadily grew and Bulgary remain constant in the end of the period which was 1500 nearly as well as robbery still less done crime by plebeians in the city till 2012 which was almost 700 at the same point which they started in 2003. However, car theft was on the zenith point at 2012. Overall it can be concluded that robbery was minor crime seen in the following year nonetheless car theft was a major crime which was on the peak in the inner city at the end of the period.
The provided multi linear graph illustrate the information related to the variation that occurred in three distinguish rate of
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in the Newport City
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Centre
between 2003 and 2012. The data
is calibrated
in numbers.

Firstly
, in 2003 the highest
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crime
in area was
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seen
in
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Bulgary
which was under 3500 approximately. Followed by
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car
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theft
and
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robbery
which was around 2700 and 700
respectively
. After the two years, the
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Bulgary
was
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went
down
gradually
until 2008 and
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car
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theft
went up in 2006 at last
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robbery
remained same till 2008.

Moving
further
, in 2008 to 2009 all three
steadily
grew and
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Bulgary
remain constant in the
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end
of the period which was 1500
nearly
as well
as
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robbery
still
less done
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crime
by plebeians in the city till 2012 which was almost 700 at the same point which they
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started
in 2003.
However
,
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car
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theft
was on the zenith point at 2012.

Overall
it can
be concluded
that
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robbery
was minor
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crime
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seen
in the following year nonetheless
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car
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theft
was a major
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crime
which was on the peak in the inner city at the
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end
of the period.

IELTS academic The line graph shows the information of changes that occur in three different crime in the city newport city between 2003 to 2012

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