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The following diagram shows the features and steps of hydro electric power station to generate electricity. Describe the stages in this process and make comparison where is relevant

The following diagram shows the features and steps of hydro electric power station to generate electricity. Describe the stages in this process and make comparison where is relevant wK9ne
The process blueprint illustrates the main component the dam power station and upper and lower reserve wire bit are needed for hydroelectric power production. There are several steps in this process using water, gravity and engineering to generate electricity. Upon initial observation it is clear that there are three steps to this process the movement of water from high to lower altitude for generation of electricity in the movement of water back to the upper reservoir and this mechanism is dictated according to day a night operation. Water from the river passes through high altitude to dam. Turbines are located below the reservoir the flow of water from the dam directly falls on turbines to produce electricity in the daytime. The night time process may be vice versa that is the flow of water from lower reservoir to higher reservoir turbine pump water into higher level reservoir true to generate electricity. Flow of water during pumping at night time. All over the generation of the hydro electric current will be produce day and night time through these steps
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blueprint illustrates the main component the dam power station and upper and lower reserve wire bit
are needed
for hydroelectric power production. There are several steps in this
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process
using
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water
, gravity and engineering to generate
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electricity
. Upon initial observation it is
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clear
that there are three steps to this
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process
the movement of
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water
from high to lower altitude for generation of
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electricity
in the movement of
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water
back to the upper
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reservoir
and this mechanism
is dictated
according to day a
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night
operation.
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Water
from the river passes through high altitude to dam. Turbines
are located
below the
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reservoir
the flow of
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water
from the dam
directly
falls on turbines to produce
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electricity
in the daytime. The
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night time
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process
may be vice versa
that is
the flow of
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water
from lower
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reservoir
to higher
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reservoir
turbine pump
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water
into higher level
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reservoir
true to generate
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electricity
. Flow of
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water
during pumping at
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night time
. All over the generation of the
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hydro electric
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current
will be produce day and
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night time
through these
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steps
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IELTS academic The following diagram shows the features and steps of hydro electric power station to generate electricity. Describe the stages in this process and make comparison where is relevant

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