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The chart shows the number of books taken by different groups of people from a local library in a week .

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The tabular data illustrates the six types of books borrowed by different teams of individual from a local library in the seven days. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, number of the stories which are taken by children, number of books which are taken by college students and numbers of science books which are taken by college students from the library is the highest. whereas, biography books which are taken by all three groups from the library is the lowest. To commence with, the Highest number of the stories which are borrowed by children is 1473. While, lowest are taken by other members is double as compare to the novels which are taken by college students from the library. Morever, the highest number of the novels which are borrowed by other members is 1865 and the lowest which are taken by children is 295. The number of science book which are collected by childrens and other members is similar. The number of science book which are taken by college students is 1763. In addition to this, the poetry book which are taken by childrens is half as compare to other members. 354 poetry books are taken by college students. The biography books which are borrowed by all three groups is the lowest as compare to other five books. Finally, the general knowledge book which are collected by children, college students and other members is 650, 894 and 589 respectively.
The tabular data illustrates the six types of
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