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Write a small paragraph about 100 words to answer these questions: what activities can people your age do in their free time where you live? Do you enjoy taking part in organized activities? Why? Is there a new activities that you would like to be available in your area?

Write a small paragraph about 100 words to answer these questions: what activities can people your age do in their free time where you live? Do you enjoy taking part in organized activities? Why? Is there a new activities that you would like to be available in your area? x87K9
In my area, people around my age (teenagers) can go to play football, basketball, badminton, etc. If we want to play, we have to pay money for renting the court. Also, we can go to a cyber core or an internet café nearby to play games, hang out with friends, or even do homework when our laptop or PC is not available. I don’t really enjoy participating in some organized activities. Depending on the activities that are happening, if the activities are suitable for my hobbies, I am willing to take part in them. If it is not, I may not go. The reason for that is because I am not interested in going to a crowded place. Right now, there is nothing new that is well-fitted for people around my age in my resident.
In my area,
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people
around my age (
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teenagers
) can go to play football, basketball, badminton, etc. If we want to play, we
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have to
pay money for renting the court.
Also
, we can go to a cyber core or an internet café nearby to play games, hang out with friends, or even do homework when our laptop or PC is not available. I don’t
really
enjoy participating in
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some
organized activities. Depending on the activities that are happening, if the activities are suitable for my hobbies, I am willing to
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take part
in them. If it is not, I may not go. The reason for
that is
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because
I am not interested in going to a crowded place. Right
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now
, there is nothing new
that is
well-fitted for
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people
around my age in my resident.
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IELTS academic Write a small paragraph about 100 words to answer these questions: what activities can people your age do in their free time where you live? Do you enjoy taking part in organized activities? Why? Is there a new activities that you would like to be available in your area?

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135 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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